lunes, 22 de agosto de 2016

"The warmth of the love"

In our Literature class we'd read three different poems with their own topics and we have therefore received a task, where we should create our own poem including one of the following topics:

  1. Loving according to our personal point of view
  2. A discusion between two characters
  3. A change in a character state


Personally I choose explaining my point of view about love.


Love is just an oddish thing
from some travelers excepcional as the birds singing in the primrose
from some others such as irksome as a strong wind in your face.

Maybe this varied sights are the result of personal experience.
Quite so, my inexperienced trip.
My grandma yarning his marvelous love story.
However not yet an actual one.

Distinctives as the seasons of the years
Despite accurate a magic time for everyone
Midnight dreams searching for love
Fearing not to find one.
Hoping it is an easy task.

Desiring it will solve the struggle
Living always in springtime
Apart from the toughs tasks
Such as girls dreams.


Song:



1 comentario:

  1. Excellent work Simona ;)
    You´ve written a lovely poem, full of beautiful images and personal reflections. I find two phrases particularly tender: "Quite so, my unexperienced trip." and the final line which mentions "girls dreams". Is it just one girl or girls in general you refer to? Notice the difference: A girl´s dreams / Girls´ dreams.
    It´s been a pleasure to read you. The link to the song is a lovely detail as well. Congratulations on your creative writing skills!

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