In Literature we have read different poems, one about how there parents get to know each other called "Stabat Mater", another in which describes how you feel when you return home and finally one that the poet describes a person who loves and fell in love. The task we should do was to choose one of this poems and describe your own experience. Here is my poem describing how I feel when I return to my home.
As simple as tender
my back is full of love.
My mom with the arms open
Waiting enthusiastic for me.
The smell of toast regret me to my childhood
Knitting everyone their memories
And their days completely varied.
Where I can be aware how much I love them
Sharing those moment I can feel as a dove
That flies through funny memories.
Everyone is back to their jobs
Waiting the moment to meet again.
Great work Juana! I can even smell breakfast just by reading your poem.
ResponderEliminarA couple of language corrections: My mom waiting enthusiastically.
The smell of toast returns me to my childhood.
Waiting for the moment to meet again.
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